well
im not the kind of person that likes to be harsh but dude, it sucked.
i gess the story was ok and you did a good job without swift. a few things. his luck was a little to good you would think that even tererists would't waste a misle on one guy and there would be more people. in the future i would sugest not to try something as 3d without swift. make things (like the granade) faster. and make shure you downsize his luck.
He was supposed to be behind walls when they were shooting at him, but I guess the bad 2Dism just didn't convey that right.
well....
it was prety funny but i found that you used the same jokes as the mortal cobat mesups like cirax turning into peanut buter jelly time banana (a true role motle for me). and the frindship turning into a fatality by acsadent. any way just dont steal other peoples jokes.
the stuf that was original like the indiana jones thing had me roleing on the ground
the guy who did mk messups is a pal of mine and the whole banana man death is just a "parody" of a parody.
i don't actually hate him.
thanks for the review
Joined on 2/8/05
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