well
im not the kind of person that likes to be harsh but dude, it sucked.
i gess the story was ok and you did a good job without swift. a few things. his luck was a little to good you would think that even tererists would't waste a misle on one guy and there would be more people. in the future i would sugest not to try something as 3d without swift. make things (like the granade) faster. and make shure you downsize his luck.